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Good.

this is quite a good movie. however there are some points i would like to make, ontop of some other reviews.

1) blood and stuff i thought usually divides slightly as it goes through the air, even in slomo. instead of just making it move in a direction, try altering the shape slightly too.
2)the "speaking": could do some work on lip syncing and find a speech generator somewhere, unless your intention was to leave it out. in this case, just improve the mouths.(or mouves? lol.).

neat

nice, humor was good......ect...um... dunno. cool flash.

ps. +0.012 score.

Sonicoblivion responds:

Thanks!

uuhhh...

the animation was fairly bad, and you need to add in a background. also reduce the transition of the flashing colour by and extra frame or two...
also the repeat of animation made it much worse.

MonochromeClock responds:

Wut you talkin bout?!

good flash

The animating of the sticks was smooth, for the most of it, and you actually managed to create a animation which had objects which were destroyed or fell apart, which can become tricky, if you put too much detail into it
while remaining a simple and easy flash, you have been able to create a good movie.
This kind of thing, however, can actually be done in several other programs, such as pivot.
if you want to create a background, add a new layer, and put it below all the other ones. then you can draw one :)

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